Difference between revisions of "Talk:St. Margaret's"

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:3. Maybe you shouldn't be telling other people how to edit in your first day of editing the QBWiki.
 
:3. Maybe you shouldn't be telling other people how to edit in your first day of editing the QBWiki.
 
: —[[User:Jonah Greenthal|Jonah]] ([[User talk:Jonah Greenthal|talk]]) 13:45, 6 May 2019 (CDT)
 
: —[[User:Jonah Greenthal|Jonah]] ([[User talk:Jonah Greenthal|talk]]) 13:45, 6 May 2019 (CDT)
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Update: I was a bit harsh on the initial comment, and the recent edits have improved the page. - Ameya

Latest revision as of 14:07, 8 May 2019

This page uses way too flowery language and is too detailed for a new team. I'd say to make edits that are more objective in nature. —Ameya Singh

1. Please sign your comments on talk pages.
2. While this page's text is generally not how I would have chosen to convey the same ideas, it does not seem egregiously wrong. There is also a ton of variation in the styles of QBWiki entries, and this doesn't seem to be that far in any direction.
3. Maybe you shouldn't be telling other people how to edit in your first day of editing the QBWiki.
Jonah (talk) 13:45, 6 May 2019 (CDT)

Update: I was a bit harsh on the initial comment, and the recent edits have improved the page. - Ameya