User talk:Trevor Nigus

Sentence structure

Thanks for all your work on Illinois articles! It's great work and very interesting to me personally. I did want to know one language oddity: it seems like you have a tendency to use phrases that elaborate on the previous sentence and are written as full sentences but are actually fragments (and thus shouldn't stand alone). Examples: the "making" fragment near the end of this edit, the second sentence/fragment of this edit, and the "with many players" portion of this edit. —Jonah (talk) 18:48, 15 May 2023 (CDT)