User talk:Trevor Nigus

Sentence structure

Thanks for all your work on Illinois articles! It's great work and very interesting to me personally. I did want to know one language oddity: it seems like you have a tendency to use phrases that elaborate on the previous sentence and are written as full sentences but are actually fragments (and thus shouldn't stand alone). Examples: the "making" fragment near the end of this edit, the second sentence/fragment of this edit, and the "with many players" portion of this edit. —Jonah (talk) 18:48, 15 May 2023 (CDT)

Please forgive me, I didn't know how to respond back to your message properly in the system. I have attempted correcting the errors that you have pointed out and will be more diligent moving forward. Please don't hesitate to continue highlighting anything egregious. Thank you again for allowing me to contribute! I have enjoyed every moment of getting to put pen to paper after many years of absorbing all these ideas, stats, & stories. —Trevor (talk) 01:14, 16 May 2023 (CDT)